Writing 101: Be Brief

If she could help she would. She searched for a name and surprisingly found the young mother. What would she say; ultimately she was a cyber-stranger in a totally different country. Regardless, she knew that she had to do something even if it meant going behind his back. An innocent human being brought here by accident.  Her involvement was a thin existence but had a major impact. Whatever she chose to do could determine if he would ever see his estranged daughter again. A soft approach was best and being a “concerned girlfriend” seemed genuine at the very least.

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2 comments

  1. Lorna's Voice · September 19, 2014

    Interesting. Your post is the only one I’ve read that addresses the part of the challenge about getting the letter back to the person… 🙂

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